The 5 W's Cohesive Writing

The Dance Class Picture


5 Cohesive W's

Who?
What?
When?
Where?
Why?
How?

There are fifteen ballerinas and an elderly male instructor. The room is bright with green color on the walls, the doors and windows lined with a darker green. There is a small golden brown dog standing by one of the ballerinas closest in view, his height only measures up to half way up the ballerinas shin. She does not see it though, only paying attention to the light coming from the window. Pointing her toe, there is one ballerina in the middle.
"That is correct." The man spoke, his hand is extended outwards in correction.
Each ballerina is in a white leotard with ruffles along the neck and sleeves. All except for one woman. She is sitting atop of a piano, scratching her back. Her tutu is lined with golden ribbon. She has a golden now, while all of the other girls have dark teal colored bows.
From the way the light is gleaming through the windows, making the room dazzle with color, it looks to be around four in the afternoon.